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Title: 03/05 Cover: 08/10 Description: 07/10 First impression: 06/10 Writing: 07/10 Character's actions and decisions: 08/10 Plot: 15/20 Explanation: 04/05 Sense: 08/10 Spelling, grammar and vocabulary: 6/10 Total: 72/100
Review/Advices: Your title is good, the cover is simple and neat. The description goes along with the story line.
I would suggest you to be a little more creative on your plot line in my opinion. It's the same old bully falling in love story. The character's and their actions and decisions are cliche. Jimin tends to change DRASTICALLY after meeting Y/N. There should be a flow in the story, which is missing here and I really think if you work on a bit you will do great!
There's some good spelling and grammar mistakes on this. First impressions are always important, and there were a lot of loop holes in the first few chapters so I would suggest you to pay attention on them and fix them.
This book needs some good editing, and don't be discouraged by this review! I am here to help you if you need any kind of help. I wish you best of luck!
