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Book: Dynamite
By: BTSOT7GURlKIMMY
Judge: Dragon_Kitara
Title: 2/5
The title is just the name of a song by our boys, and make no other connections with the oneshot.
Cover: 6/10
Aesthetic, yet doesn't do much about the story.
Description: 7/10
It looks fine!
First impression: 5/10
It was a very common topic you chose to write on, there are about 100 books on the 8th member of BTS.
You tried your best, but there were enormous punctuation errors, a few tense faults too.
Writing style: 6/10
It is good, but pretty bland. The words don't have enough intensity to hold a reader, it felt monotonous.
Character's action and decisions: 8/10
They were fine, but often felt pretty pushy.
Plot: 10/20
It was like reading a diary about BTS with one more member. There wasn't anything exceptional or hooking, and that decreased the intensity and charm.
Explanation: 3/5
You did good, but I won't read it. It does not pique my interest.
Sense: 5/10
I don't know what to say...
Grammar and vocab: 5/10
Punctuation, lower case and upper case... They are too many. Proofreading is necessary.
Total: 57/100
Judge: Mae_writes_08
Title: 5/5
Cover: 8/10
Description: 9/10
First impression: 9/10
Writing style: 10/10
Character's actions and decisions: 9/10 Plot: 20/20
Explanation: 5/5
Sense: 10/10
Grammar, spelling and vocabulary: 9/10
Total: 94/100
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