✍ Round 3 [One-Shot Elimination]

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Book: Nodus TollensBy: namjesusmylove

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Book: Nodus Tollens
By: namjesusmylove

Judge: Dragon_Kitara

Title: 5/5

Unique and different. Really wanted to know what it meant.

Cover: 9/10

Beautifully done. Your subtitle is getting cut off 

Description: 5/10

Needs to be intriguing and give us an idea of what the book is about. Its repeated on the cover and in the chapter. Maybe also add what the title means

First Impression: 5/10

Wasn’t very interesting and I could already predict what will happen in the story

Writing style: 5/10

Your writing style is a very common one. It needs to be a bit more creative.

Characters actions and Decisions: 6/10

Characters were rushed and predictable. Your female lead gave into Jimin way to easily 

Plot: 16/20

You got a good idea but it’s too predictable. This is a common plot, be a bit more creative and add more twists to it. As I said before your characters are rushed and the female lead gave in to easy. Its not a good impression on her. Your plot and characters need a bit more developing.

Explanation: 4/5

Can be a bit more descriptive.

Sense: 8/10

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