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Simple and goes with the story, yet wasn't something attractive.
Cover: 5/10
The cover has just Jimin on it. Anf that doesn't relate with the story any how. The fonts used are too small and mix with the colour of Jimin's shirt, and is hardly distinguishable.
Description: 3/10
I get the idea, but the tense is wrong.
"What happens to them?" should be in place of "What happened to then?"
Even, there is a spelling mistake.
First impression: 3/10
I did not like it, it wasn't what I would've looked for in a vampire story. There are upper and lower case errors, punctuation and tense errors. It was too messy.
Eg: "I woke up from alarm."
It could be, "The intonation of the blaring alarm broke my peaceful sleep."
Or "The horrendous tone of alarm pulled me away from my peaceful nap."
This was just one example.
Writing style: 4/10
It is an errored story writing.
I won't prefer reading it, or anything like it.
Though the story had potential, the way you wrote didn't catch much attention.
Character's action and decisions: 3/10
Y/n accepted Jimin without any doubts? Like a human mate must have so many doubts regarding a vampire mate.
Jimin acted coy, and silly. And Zoya, didn't even get angry on him? There were so many mishaps.
