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Book: Mera Pehla Pyaar - Chashmish!
Author: Nidhi
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Judge: Adrija
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Book: Mera Pehla Pyaar - Chashmish!Author: Nidhimysterious_introvertJudge: AdrijaAdrija_G07

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TOTAL: 78/100

Hiii Nidhi,This Is Adrija.Im not A writer but A Reader on this platform And The description Below Records My reviews On Your Book❤️Take Love❤️✨

OVERALL PLOT:
I enjoyed The story Very Much especially How you Mentioned About Their First meet On the sevpuri stall And Their Nazre exchange and all.And Also Their nok jhok and Those messenger scenes and All

LANGUAGE AND STYLE:
So If i see the story From this perspective Then What i feel Is The Language And the Writing Style Can be improved And Also In Some scenes I was getting Confused That Who Was delivering The Dialogue.So the story would Turn Great if you check these Points.

GRAMMAR:
There are Few spelling Mistakes and Some grammatical Errors.Please go through Them And edit them.

DESCRIPTION OF THE SCENE:
I am Quite Happy with the well and Elaborate Description.

COVER:
Its good But you know the Name Of the book and The Cover is What People judge At The first glance So Your Cover should Be Eye-Catchy.

BURLB:
What I think Is U should add On Some Good Sub Titles For the Parts

EMOTIONAL DEVELOPMENT:
I have Nothing To say about This Point As it was Perfect according To me.

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT:
The Character Development Was also Perfect.

OVERALL ENJOYMENT:
I will surely Suggest this Book to others And u are a Fantastic Writer I would Love To read More Ffs penned down by you.

Thank You❤️

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