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Book: Barrister Babu- Revenge Or A Motive?
Author: Ammy
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Judge: Anshu
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Book: Barrister Babu- Revenge Or A Motive?Author: AmmyAmmyLustreJudge: AnshuRoopa_Ani

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TOTAL : 93.5/100

Hi Ammy, Anshu this side. So these are my views after reading your story.

I loved the main plot of your story a changed Bondita who no longer is here for love basically i side we all wanted in the show but were unable to get.
I loved how you described the scenes only it was lagging in some parts. Moreover the way you make the readers confused and make their head go spin in finding who is the real person behind the mask is just outstanding.
Also making the important words bold for hints is just amazing.
Speaking of the cover I think it needs to be more powerful as it's a revenge book so I guess the fonts in the cover are need to be strong. I recommend you to do the necessary changes.
I feel the attachment with the characters was lagging a bit.

Overall I loved the book and plot. Looking forward to the upcoming chapters and also the suspense.

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