Book: On The Right Path
Author: Shreya
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Judge: Adrija
Adrija_G07TOTAL: 78.5
Hiii Shreya, This is Adrija. Im not a writer but a reader on this platform and the description below records my reviews On your book
❤️Take Love❤️✨OVERALL PLOT:
The plot was a bit different from the other Ffs as you have portrayed Batuk and Manorama in a different way. So yeah it was too good, and I would love to appreciate your idea. But the way your story line was going I expected Bondita to be a bit strong but anyways the way you wrote was good too❤️LANGUAGE AND STYLE:
It's good but U can use some new vocabularies which will make the chapters more entertaining.GRAMMAR:
I found few spelling mistakes do check them out.DESCRIPTION OF THE SCENE:
It was okay but I Guess elaborate description would go well. Only elaborate them a bit And Boommmm!It will be perfect!!!COVER:
Its PERFECT!BLURB:
U should work more on thinking the titles.EMOTIONAL ATTACHMENT:
The emotional attachment was there.ORIGINALITY:
It was good and is having A different storyline.CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT:
The characters developed really well.OVERALL ENJOYMENT:
It was a great experience to try your book our and would definitely suggest it to others. I hope I didn't hurt you with my words I just wrote what I felt like as reader.Bye bye ,
Take Care❤️
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