Hello my readers and followers I was wondering what you all thought about, the changes made to the book from the original parts of the book. I had thought changing the book will be good, and help get me into working more with the book and it has. The rest of the chapters will soon be published once they are done with Re-edits of the chapters.
Changes coming
A rivalry between tsreyio and kxee
Neteyam, kiri, spider being overprotective of lani, and maybe overshadowed her outing with the boy
Aonung and Rotox not liking the challenger against tisreyo for lani love
Tuk and moat being fans of kxee and liking him
Jake and Neytiri being overprotective parents and not like kxee that much or at all.
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Shame
FanfictionAll her life lani had been told she had brought shame to her family, she was not like either of her father jake or neytiro. She was more human like and she always been to be having a hard time fitting in. Her older bothers seem to be doing a better...
