Carl; drowning

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Another sad story! This story is for izzym12 even though they didn't request it! Sorry if this story is bad :(
oh and I checked it over and over so there's mistakes - Xael
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400 words

Carl's perspective is normal while yours is italics.

A lump in my throat formed, choking on my tears.

I held my breath, thinking it will be all over sooner or later while my subconscious rejected.

I opened the broken drawer, in my old quiet bathroom, taking out the thing that'll damage me the most.

I felt uneasy but forced myself into doing it.

I bit my lip as teeth marks formed around it, the bone tore my skin while a light red liquid spilled.

I took a deep breath as my eyes became heavy wanting my feelings to collapse, leaving nothing but sadness.

I let my tears fall while I held the hard, cold thing on my palm bringing it to my salted skin. I slowly dragged my finger against the trigger. Pulling it.

Who knew a lifeless bullet could do so much, leaving this cruel life to an even darker world.

My numb body slammed against the cold blooded floor while my thoughts soon fade away.

As a tear ran down my face, I felt myself drift.

I lightly stepped inside the cold, quiet house.

Looking around for my surroundings I spotted a brown rusty door.

I walked further to the slightly opened door, wanting nothing more but emptiness.

Before I could reached the beaten knob, the quiet room became full of sorrows along with a bang.

I stopped at my tracks as a chill trailed down my back giving me an unwanted feeling of goosebumps.

A bullet rolled out of the dark room to my presence. Tears forcefully left my eyes as I dared my feet to walk further.

I hesitantly brought my hand to the wooden door, pushing it with regret.

A lifeless body laid there while a puddle of his own thoughts formed onto the floor.

My eyes threaten to spill as I felt my body shook in my own guilt.

My head Spun as my lungs filled with water as I stood in this depressed world, drowning.

Next chapter 50 reads

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I did some changes in the first 7 paragraphs, just to inform you :)
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Quick question and please comment! should I make a fanfic? About who? It can be about shameless or Magcon :)

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