BOOK: You, Me & She
BY: IndigoWhisper
REVIEW BY: Gise_lliana
CHAPTERS READ: 20+
Cover and Title: 2.5/5
The cover of the book is good but unfortunately is not able to vibe well with the storyline. It kind of also bothers the eye. A more appealing cover can therefore be used in order to achieve it's goal.
Title is a bit too rough and can be better considering the well established storyline and therefore could blend well in order to match each other.
Blurb: 4.5/5
The opening of the blurb is intriguing but can be enhanced for a more better perspective. Moreover, the grammar and vocabulary used is sufficient in order to carry out the purpose of the blurb. Maybe a little more view into the plot twists can make it more effective.
Plot and Structure: 10/10
The plot is very intriguing. It kept the reader hooked from the start till the end. The flow was perfect and pacing wasn't abrupt or too laggy. Furthermore, the descriptions and the world building was amazing. The chapters were greatly interconnected and therefore nothing felt out of place. Structurally, you did an excellent job but a bit more work into it can make it better.
Character development: 5/5
The character development of all the characters seems gradual and not abrupt or sudden. Especially, Narae's character is very wholesome. The bad girl vibes amd her acting in order to live a better life all the while plotting and scheming does make her a very unique character. Though at a first glance readers might not actually agree to her scheming personality but would gradually give in for she is not fighting for her own selfish needs but also her sister's.
Taehyung's character is definitely the stereotypical one, wherein he is depicted as a rich guy with no lacking. Yet his ability to sense his need for having someone who would listen and understand him rather than satisfying his desires truly makes him one of a kind.
Jennie's character is a bit stereotypical one and at this current point in the story doesn't hold much value i.e. upto chapter 20.
Grammar and Vocabulary: 4/5
The grammar and vocabulary used in the book is very profound. The construction of the phrases and sentences is quite apt. Furthermore, it seems the author has worked on proofreading henceforth making the content errorless.
Overall enjoyment: 10/10
The plotline with a scheming protagonist made it very interesting not to mention it kept the reader invested the whole time. The storyline resonated very well with the readers describing one's greed, selfishness and needs. This story is definitely worthy of being read.
Total: 36/40
