I have written 100 oneshot parts in this book. Somehow. In about a third of the time than I did before.
Probably because the first had a lot of single part oneshots, and this has a lot of multi-part things.
But, as I did when I hit 100 parts in my first book of oneshots, I'm going to judge all of them with immense scrutiny and give my opinions.
:DD
I will also note the great annoyance that of Wattpad refusing to let me reorder parts and have it remain that way, so several of the oneshots aren't together, which is annoying.
ANYWAY, let's begin!
-Vexed
Convex backstoryyy!
And, it hasn't changed!
And I also will never finish the animatic I invented it for...
Yaaaayy
I would make this so much angstier if I rewrote it... Cub gets upset, and then 5 seconds later he's calm again.
Also Cub knows Scar's hurt and then Scar has to mention it later on. Dude he's covered in blood. You heard him screaming.
Also I made the vex speak in much shorter phrases these days.
Oooh I forgot I put more dark oak into the building design, fun.
Hehheeee and then they FORGET EVERYTHING!
I still sometimes run through oneshots in my mind of Cub and Scar remembering what happened, which would be better if it was angstier.
Oh ho ho little foreshadowing bits, elytra feeling wrong.
Also I would add more Tango into this now because he's a vexling at this point. He KNOWS what they're going through why doesn't he tell them??
OH Cub being half possessed dang
Rather good, would rewrite some parts of it these days, but still well written, angsty, and Convex
8/10
(Also remembered at this point that I may have to edit Someone out of some of these...)
-Untold
Oooooooh sculky sculky. But why did I name it that? Whyyy?
Oh THAT idea that I cut out. 0-0
I tried so hard to make Cub honest about stuff because so many of the situations in my stuff could be resolved by the characters just talking about it.
Also outside perspective of what happened to Cub. Nice.
Nope still has to have Cub hiding stuff-
To be honest he gives decent reasons.
I still like the argument being interrupted by the Tango dungeon voice. That's cool. The arguments are cool.
WHY DOESN'T CUB TALK THEN-
He goes into Decked Out, where he was hurt before, instead of talking to Scar.
Though maybe it still would happen if they talked, or we have Cub knowing nothing about it.
Aha the overpowered AFK- I think I changed that headcanon, but I don't know what to or how.
But the plot twist is really cool
Also, the misforming of the reader mistaking Cub and the Sculk's actions is fun.
The description of Cub possessed ooooooh that's cool

VOUS LISEZ
MCYT RANDOMNESS 2
FanfictionMy other book is 150 parts now... so it's time to move onto the 'sequel' of it. Enjoy!