Pile Of Nonsense (Blitz)

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Smart man

Smart phone

Phone is ringing

Phone is silent

Silent hill is cold

Silent man is loud

Loud and decent

Loud and proud

Proud of his life

Proud of his time

Time is short

Time can kill

Kill the deal

Kill the boss

Boss is cruel

Boss can rule

Rule number one

Rule out the enemies

Enemies of my mind

Enemies of the state

State of the art

State your opinion

Opinion on the poem

Opinion of the others

Others are afraid

Others may disagree

Disagree with you

Disagree with me

Me and you are right

Me and me can be

Be sure to get back

Be careful on the way

Way to go my friend

Way better than most

Most people don't know

Most likely don't see

See the title above

See the truth and justice

Justice for the victims

Justice of the heaven

Heaven opened the door

Heaven and earth and hell

Hell broke loose

Hell yes I can win

Win this lousy style

Win a new knowledge

Knowledge is a power

Knowledge is a curse

Curse...

Power...

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It seems deep doesn't it? XD

It's actually a pile of nonsense!!... just thought to give it a shot and it's fun!! Thank you ronaboberts for suggesting this style. It was an awesome experience 😀🌹
A_Poetic_Kill I hope you can do this soon as well 😉

For more information about the poetry style... read below 👇👇

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(The Blitz Poem), a poetry form created by Robert Keim.

This form of poetry is a stream of short phrases and images with repetition and rapid flow.

Begin with one short phrase, it can be a cliché. Begin the next line with another phrase that begins with the same first word as line 1. The first 48 lines should be short, but at least two words.

The third and fourth lines are phrases that begin with the last word of the 2nd phrase, the 5th and 6th lines begin with the last word of the 4th line, and so on, continuing, with each subsequent pair beginning with the last word of the line above them, which establishes a pattern of repetition.

Continue for 48 total lines with this pattern, And then the last two lines repeat the last word of line 48, then the last word of line 47.

The title must be only three words, with some sort of preposition or conjunction joining the first word from the third line to the first word from the 47th line, in that order.

There should be no punctuation. When reading a BLITZ, it is read very quickly, pausing only to breathe.

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