Heartache (mirror Tempoem)

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At a battle with a crushing heartache

In my soul there's an earthquake

Rattling, writhing like a snake

Biting my shame awake

I   cannot   take

A       break

Heartache

My   mistake

Till the daybreak

Midnights   I lie awake

Causing her heart to  break

Regret and guilt  only a flake

My  heart  is burning  on a stake

**Winner of The PoetsPub (May Contest 2018)

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The (Tempoem) is a poetry form created by Bill Temple in 2012

The Tempoem consists of 28 words, divided into 7 lines , which all rhyme.

The layout is simple:

Line 1 : 7 words

Line 2 : 6 words

Line 3 : 5 words

Line 4 : 4 words

Line 5 : 3 words

Line 6 : 2 words

Line 7 : 1 words (same as the last word in line 1)

*The last word is also the title of the Tempoem.

* The Tempoem should make sense if read both ways.

* The perfect Tempoem should be aesthetically visual. (You can use double spacing to add the ascending effect)

*A mirror Tempoem is actually two Tempoems connected by a central keyword.

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