Chapter 30

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TobiasPOV

I jolt awake from hearing a terrible scream. I look beside me, and Tris isn't there.
I get up, and sprint through the house looking for her.
I notice the door to the apartment is open.
But before I leave, I quickly get dressed, and grab my gun I just recently hid under our mattress. I look up and there is a note on my tiny dresser.
I grad it.

We knew you spread the word to Dauntless, and are planning to attack us. I decided to take a step ahead.
Can't wait to see you again. Don't wait, the time is ticking.

-Jeanine

I crumble the note in frustration.
I try my best to keep all my emotion from spilling out.
It's not really working. I fall to my knees, and scream through gritted teeth.
"No..not Tris.." I breathe through the tears.
My anger finally gets through every inch of my body, and I think I snap.
I stand up, whip my tears, and load my gun.
"I will do anything to save you Tris, even it means getting myself killed." I say, running out the door, and slamming it behind me.
I check my watch. It's 3:00 am.
I pound on Zeke's door.
I hear a groan.
He finally opens the door.
"What the fuck is-" he says, and stops when he sees the gun.
"What's going on?" He says, more alert now.
"They took Tris, Zeke. Jeanine took Tris."
Zeke rushes to get ready, and grabs his gun, and follows me out to wake Christina.
It doesn't take her long at all to join us.
She starts to tear up as I explain.
"Why her? I swear, a lot of blood is going to be spilled tonight." She growls, as she rushes to her room.
When she comes out, I notice a knife in her pocket, and one gun in each hand.
"Let's go get those mother fuckers."
We run around Dauntless, trying to get as many people as we can.
By the time we actually head to the door, we have the gang, and about 200 Dauntless with us.
I wish they would get their lazy ass's up and help us.
I shake my head as we all jump onto the train.
"DOES EVERYONE HAVE A WEAPON?!" I yell over the powerful wind.
Everyone holds up the hands, all carrying loaded guns.
"GOOD. NOW WHEN WE GET THERE, DONT SPLIT UP UNTIL TOLD TOO!" I yell.
They yell back.
In about 15 minutes we arrive at Erudite.
I tell have the group to attack from behind, and the rest attack the front.
The gang and I attack the front.
We rush in there.
When we get though the do, no one is there.
We creep slowly, looking under and behind every desk.
All the computers are turned off.
I look at the group behind me.
"Alright, have go the the left, and half go right, understand?" They nod in agreement.
Uriah, Zeke, Marlene and some other Dauntless go right, and Me, Christina, Shauna, and the rest of the Dauntless go left.
The bright white hallways are so confusing.
It's like running through a maze.
We turn left, turn right, left then left again, at stop when we hear footsteps.
I ain't gun around the corner and shoot two bullets.
I hear screams.
I look around the corner and see two armed Erudite men on the floor, blood pulling on the floor.
I can see the womb in the head of ft on the left.
I shot the one on the right in the chest.
"Damn Four, good aim." Says Christina.
"Thanks. Come on, let's go." I say.
I try to think of where Jeanine would be hiding.
I find a staircase a few minutes later.
We shoot all the Erudite blocking the way, and quickly run down the stairs.
When we get to the bottom, it looks like we just arrived in a cellar.
Cell next to cell next to cell.
I think this is the prison.
Maybe Tris is down here.
"Everyone! Look in every cell! If you find someone, let me know." We all run off, and search the cells for life.
When we get back together, they say they didn't see anyone.
We run back up the stairs, and weave through the corridors of Erudite again, running into more arms Erudite as we go.
I slow down when I hear a strangled scream.
I stop.
The girl screams again.
"Tris!" I yell.
I sprint down the corridor the screams are coming from, checking all the windows for a sign of life.
When I reach the end of the hallway, I see Tris, laying on the ground, looking lifeless.
I pound on the glass.
"Tris!" I yell.
She twitches, but doesn't move.
She screams again.
"NO! LEAVE HIM ALONE! DONT  HURT HIM!" She screams.
She bolts straight up.
Jumping to her feet, she turns around, facing me.
"TRIS!" I yell.
Her face is streaked with tears.
She doesn't notice me.
She covers her mouth with her hand, and stretches her other one outward, like she's touching something.
Then she shakes her head, and her eyes widen.
"TOBIAS!" She yells, running to the glass, she places her hands on the glass.
I put mine where hers is.
We both are crying now.
"Tris, I'll get you out of here. I promise." I say.
She rests her head on the glass.
I do the same.
We stand there for a few minutes, then I hear a gun shot.
Erudite.
"Tobias, you need to go to Jeanine's office, at the top floor, and stop the serum. Kill Jeanine. The Erudite will be here to inject me with more fear serum. You have to go, or they will get you too.
I love you so much." She says, sobbing.
"I love you too Tris. Be Brave. I'll get you out." I say, looking her in her swollen eyes.
I run to the others, and we head to Jeanine's office.

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