3rd place: "About a Girl" by The_Dweeb
Score: 95/115
Judges comment: I really like the idea. The title could be better, the story is so much more than just a girl. And include more emotion in the characters Ashely's dad died in a car crash a little over a month ago and all she says is that she isn't over it and probably never will be. She would most likely have a pain in her side, and her breath catch everytime she realised he was gone.
2nd place: "Note to self" By lee-fox
Score: 101/115
Judges comment: This is a really great teen fiction story. But it lacks things to make it even better. Examples: the pacing is a little fast, which helps with emotions and personalities of the characters. It has a great title and is incorporated throughout the story. The description could use a bit more of a hook, to pull readers in, but once they give your book a try your cannot put it down.
1st place : "Distant Stars" By: wonderland_explorer3
Score: 103/115
Judges comment: This book wrapped me up from the moment I started reading it. The characters have clear personalities, and they are very relatable. You can't help but to root for Melody and Leo. The only thing I can suggest is to better describe what happened like you use this line multiple ways "I was thinking over the past week" Meaning whole book is basically told through flashbacks.
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