3rd place: The Fayes serect by: @SarahBeth9009
Score: 105/115
Judges comment: This is a really intriguing story. It was hard to stop reading. The cover is beautiful. The one thing I would suggest is inculde more of the charaters thoughts and feelings to improve character development.
2nd place: The darkest blue The_Lady_Sam
Score 107/115
Judges comment: Your story is really creative and unique. I suggest changing the cover a bit the picture is not great, and the font is basic. You have a great vocabulary, and I didn't catch any grammar or spelling mistakes. But I think you need to explain somethings in the beginning so the reader isn't completely lost. We are kinda thrown into the middle of the story.
1st place: The unordinary life of the enchantress by: Eilfen
Score: 110/115
Judges comment: The cover is a little dark. I was immediately interesting in your story. The way you described everything made the fantasy element stand out. The charater development is really great I want to know more about the enchantress and the boy.
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