3rd place: "Aim To Engage" by JessJad135
Score: 98/115
Judges comment: I enjoyed reading your stories very much. The detail and description was very well done. I think that you can extend your stories a bit more, it does tell a story but you can have more events happen. I also think that grammar can be worked on a little, but it wasn't too big of a deal as it didn't affect the story greatly. I was interested with your story and it had a great hook.
2nd place: "Teardrops" by AayushiGala
Score: 99/115
Judges comment: This is a great poetry book. I didn't get bored of it and was very insightful. I loved how each poem told a story and it was also short and sweet. Just so you know, I did not deduct a point for you having a poetry story in the Short Story category as it was full at the time of your entry.
1st place: "So Much More" by Just_Average_
Score: 102/115
Judges comment: It was a great story, it was relatable and creative. I think the story could have a bit more description and have something that might hook you in a bit better. I think that you should keep writing and maybe make it into more of a story, I bet people would want to read it.
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