Fanfic

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by CaseyTheFox

by CaseyTheFox

Okay I finished consecution

It's was eh

The story is...complicated. I mean it's better than expected but Skye kinda ruined this

Most of Skye Winter/Patrina Sternfang/Pythia Olave's parts were confusing af

She knows how to heal someone who lost a lot of blood and suffered from hypothermia at the moment but didn't know that being a hare doesn't mean having to regulate blood sugar levels cuz it's cold

And ig leaving someone with hypothermia completely naked in a room without fire is logic right?..

She also a mechanic

And is strong af and is very quiet

And there was one point where she breaks into Jack/Runner/James' house but all the windows were closed and the door was locked so how tf did she get in?

And then we have Mr. CockyDitch Savage

He was a spy and failed a mission so he retired and bla bla bla he has a habit of flirting with someone he's supposed to attack and flirting even tho he's nearly dead and can barely talk

Cuz that makes sense -_-

He also has a weird thing where whenever he flirts, he calls them "darling"

I...ugh...

So I do like the word darling whenever it's in songs and stuff cuz for some reason it gives me nostalgia but when flirting???

Ditch no that crap's old

So then we have Parker.

Overall my favorite character. She's legit the thing I love the most of this fanfic and Parker x Jack/James/Runner is better than Jack/James/Runner x Skye/Patrina/Pythia

I swear this fanfic has a lot of names

Oh yea and the names r all terrible

seriously Whiskershreik??? James McRuffles??? PATRINA STERNFA-

If I say that name one more time I might go crazy xdddd

But yea the fanfic was meh. It only has 7 chapters and wasn't ever finished

And I agree with the intense action parts and peril in the review but another dazzling romance between a fox and a bunny???

Ditch there were BARELY any cute moments of Jack and Skye

So those r my thoughts on Zootopia Consecution. It wasn't too bad but not really great either. I'd say the most memorable and best moments were the ones with Parker and Jack/James/Runner