So, uhm... I got an idea for the next part, but I want to know your opinion about it.
My idea involves adding my own OC to the story.
Name: Atalanta
Age: 15
Power: influencing people's minds and emotions through singing
Appearance: long, black hair, 5'2" tall, tan skin, dark brown eyes
Outfit: normally wears a gray hoodie long-sleeved jacket and black pants along with black rubber shoes. She also wears glasses, although it was more for the special capabilities of the glasses rather than her eyesight.
Characteristics: a jolly girl, has a tendency to keep her problems to herself while being the counsel for the others. Smart and full of wisdom, rhough not as much as Solar. Usually calm when not in a caffeine rush. Has a very keen eye.
Weapons: twin daggers (no special capabilities); the glasses (can find the strengths and weaknesses of the enemy)I need at least 3 comments on a specific choice before I can continue the story, because it can affect the flow.
So...
Should I?
OR
Should I not?
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