How I Became A City girl

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Tee

Yana

Lin

Ciara

They outfits they wore to the crazy horse.

TEE POV
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I looked at ciara and took a deep breath. I am just gonna keep my opinion and thoughts to myself. We was at the door tryna get in when Lin took us to the back entrance. We walked in and "My type" was playing and bitches was shaking ass galore. Then it got dark and "Maybe" by Teyana Taylor started playing.

I looked up and saw a big darkskin girl taking over the stage.
"Everybody give it up for brownsugarrrrrr." The DJ yelled Min the mic.  That's definitely Bre.

Everybody clapped and was throwing money at her and I looked over to Lin and she just sitting there looking at her ass and I'm like maybe she gay but whatever.
Ciara POV
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I feel a little to over dress and I saw them glares Tee was sending me but at the same time I'm 17 I'm grown and I don't give a fuck as long as I got this I.D she can't say shit. But while brown sugar was dancing. it was a fine ass nigga that kept looking at me and I looked and glanced back. He smiled and made his way over to me. I blushed and tried to act all cute and stuff.
"Hey shawty my name is Mikey." He said
I laughed. "What type of name is that."
"You right. My real name Daddy." He smiled.
Bitch I died like whew niggas.
I laughed so hard. He slipped me his number and told me to call him as he walked away. Typical nigga shit. Anyways the girl was done dancing Yana pointed for me to follow her and I did. She was done and Lin took us to the stripper locker room. And I was just shocked and I put my hand over my mouth cause it smell like ass, pussy juice, and titis. I looked over and Tee was doing the same thing I laughed cause only lords know what she is thinking.

LIN POV
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I couldn't wait to see Bre we got in the locker room and there she was.
"Breeeeeeeeeeee." I screamed
"Oop hey bitch wassup girl was you here the whole time." She asked while hugging me.
"Yep and brought some friends with me." I said while I looked back at Tee, Yana, and Ciara coming in standing in the corner.
They looked so uncomfortable.
Bre did a fake smile.
"Awww hey all I'm Bre. Lin friend. She introduced her self while opening up her locker.
"Well we came to ask you a favor. But we wanted to speak to you privately." Yana said glancing around.
"Ight I gotta go pay house fee then I"ll be——." She got off by some Lightskin girl.
"So Bitch why the fuck would u take my song hoe I should whoop yo ass. Bitch I always dance to that song that's my theme song." She came all up in Bre face.
"First off Bitch who the fuck is talking to I'll beat yo ass hoe and like the fuck You said yo ass always dance to the song so the crowd was glad to see someone new dance to it and watch yo mou—-."
The Lightskin girl punched bre in her face and almost knocked Bre down. "Yeah Bitch now I bet you know better to steal my song again hoe." Bre looked up and charged at her and dragged her and started stomping her face in so all we seen was blood being splashed everywhere. I ran up and tried to grab Bre arm but she was spitting and damn near killed the girl. The body guards came in and Bre ran out and I followed her as so did Tee, Ciara and Yana.

Ayeeee periodt so I wanna know how y'all feel and what y'all think about this book so far and any suggestions I'm open to em.

BRE

Mikey