My critiques mean no offense to the story nor author. This is solely intended for the betterment of his/her work, thus it does not mean to hurt him/her in any way. Everything stated here came from my own opinion and perspective which may or may not differ from others.
This contains spoilers about the story, beware.
This is a rough draft, typographical and grammatical errors are to be expected.
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▪ The words used were pretty common yet understandable. When reading the title, it seems like those typical titles that have another meaning behind it, which is good because it fitted the vibes and genre of the story. However, when I've finished reading it (up to ten chapters), I still have no idea what the title meant, since there weren't any foreshadowings/hints given. I think it'd be great if sa simula pa lang, may hint na ang mga readers kung bakit gano'n ang pinili mong pamagat ng iyong kuwento.
BOOK COVER:
▪ The background used really gives off a romance/teen fiction story, kudos to that! Though parang hindi gaanong nababagay ang font na ginamit sa cover. At saka medyo nagbe-blend din ang kulay ng font sa background. I think mas maganda iyong dating cover na ginamit mo, o kaya naman, kung puwede, palitan natin ang cover. Gawin nating mas unique at appealing para sa readers.
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