I loved your opening chapter, your first chapter made me want to know what was about to happen in the next chapters to come. Your writing style was simple and I enjoyed it. I really enjoyed your book. Your plot development was exquisite. Keep it up, sweetie.
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Your story description was very okay and intriguing. Your storyline was different and unique. No grammatical error was found in your book which enabled me to read the book smoothly. So basically you did well. Bravo!
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The title of your book piqued my interest and I began wondering what we were counting. I enjoyed the way you developed all your characters. I could relate to some characteristics of your characters too. I also enjoyed your choice of words, it was very easy to understand. I couldn't find any grammatical errors either. I find suspense-filled books intriguing. I really enjoyed your book. In simple terms, your storyline is superb. Good work darling.
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Nice to see a flirty female lead and a clueless male lead. I felt like the friends are only enjoying life without a serious dimension about life. The humor is fresh. I felt the trope of messaging an unknown number and becoming friends is repetitive but the way they are acquainted is unique. The message is also good. but I had to reread the message if it was from one mobile or all of her friend's mobiles.
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The disappointment of WB with a swimsuit and without a pool or ocean was relatable. But I felt Bert was unnecessarily bullying the poor WB. Whenever Bert opened his mouth, he ridiculed WB. But WB seems to ignore the negativity in life which is great.
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The Chapter titles are cute! The fights on the ship are enjoyable. The dialogues between characters are good. It's a well-detailed story. The mix of pirate adventure with humor is a good try.
