Apart from the story description, everything was awesome! The characters had a good amount of mystery in them and the pace was perfect. The Writing style was good and captured the attention of the readers at once and I particularly loved the careful amount of minuscule details you put in and the precision of judgements.
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It was perfect, just perfect. I didn't even need to finish one chapter to know this book is quality material. The writing style was beautiful and the idea was fresh and original.
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The book needs several aspects to be rectified and while reading the flow isn't felt. Emotion and careful thought are absent from the sentences. The book is good, but I think it can be better if you fix the cover and the writing style a bit. Great Job on what you have done though!
