"We may not have won any prizes, but we're walking away like champs."
Carnivals, the place for happiness, love and joy. The place for the thrill of adventure, as you venture into with you companions, ready to enter as a player, and walk our as a win...
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ꗃ﹕❜Title: 10/10 ꗃ﹕❜In my opinion, the book's title is really intriguing—"Truth in a Masquerade"—and it clearly establishes the tone of the book. The story's whole context is judicial, which implies that the majority of it is about the law. And if there is one thing the law does, it lies to you, and finding the truth in it might be difficult at times.
ꗃ﹕❜Cover: 5/10 ꗃ﹕❜While the title of the book establishes the tone of the novel, the cover fails miserably. It has nothing to do with the story's theme, and I don't think it's appropriate. It's not really eye-catching or noteworthy, though I did like the font design.
ꗃ﹕❜Blurb: 9/10 ꗃ﹕❜ I thought the book summary was intriguing and unique, and I thought the writer did a fantastic job writing it. However, the summary delves too far into the romance part of the plot, rather than the "throat-cutting lawyers out for each other" sense. However, it is fascinating enough to attract readers.
ꗃ﹕❜Writing: 18/20 ꗃ﹕❜I'm not exaggerating when I say I wasn't expecting the writing to be so meticulous. The author made an excellent job depicting scenes, which contain lovely details and dialogue. There are almost no spelling or grammar issues, and I believe the author must have gone over their manuscript several times, evaluating it until they believed it was flawless. There were points when I felt the text needed more editing, but it was readable and could have been skipped. However, because it is their first book, I would like the author to go over it and add a few descriptions here and there to make the writing more fluid and easy.
ꗃ﹕❜Characters: 10/20 ꗃ﹕❜The first time our main characters meet is in a bar. Though I am not happy to say that I did not feel the spark that the author was going for. To be honest, their first meeting did not set a tone for their relationship either. It is an ongoing book so I do not have much to say about either of the main characters though I think that they are both shown in the same light and that they are ambitious lawyers. As I further progress through the book I would love to see dynamics between them, more polar opposites and more enticing and engaging than what was shown in the beginning but for the time being they are just very......normal. And, I don't know how to feel about that.
ꗃ﹕❜Elements I really liked:
₊˚✧ The writing is by far my favorite, I am really impressed with it, though there are elements that can be enhanced a little.
ꗃ﹕❜Elements I would like to see regarded:
₊˚✧ The cover. ₊˚✧ The pace and conflict
ꗃ﹕❜Overall: 52/70 ꗃ﹕❜ Do not be disheartened seeing the score since most of it has been lost in my thoughts of the character. I haven't given many marks under that section because the book is ongoing, and that is something to mark on the shown progress.
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