"We may not have won any prizes, but we're walking away like champs."
Carnivals, the place for happiness, love and joy. The place for the thrill of adventure, as you venture into with you companions, ready to enter as a player, and walk our as a win...
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ꗃ﹕❜Title: 4/5 Perfect, Short , Sweet and Captivating, goes along with the overall theme and plot of the book
ꗃ﹕❜Cover: 4/5 Is Aesthetically pleasing and Color schemes go well with it perfectly.
ꗃ﹕❜Blurb: 4/5 A very good blurb indeed, it highlights the key points is short and captivating and gives you just enough information to make you want to read more.
ꗃ﹕❜Hook:4/5 The hook (which I'll consider from the prologue) was perfect. Not too much description but enough to keep you reading more and Definitely keeps you interested and curious about the world to read more about it.
ꗃ﹕❜Grammar & Spelling: 8/10 Absolutely perfect! Not a comma out of place and plenty of use of different punctuation marks.
ꗃ﹕❜ Plot: 8/10 A very intriguing and interesting plot indeed. From the well thought out characters and their beliefs and certain mindsets it gives a very good plot and story indeed. The dynamic between the two Hashira's and starting and avoiding their 'love' for each other.
ꗃ﹕❜Writing Style: 8/10 Perfect! Your own style of writing with your touch if originality and uniqueness.
ꗃ﹕❜Writing Flow: 7/10 A good and steady pace and each event seamlessly transitioned from this to that. Though a lot of info dumping (Dropping a lot of information in one chapter) in the first chapter which does slow down the plot just a bit but does turn off readers.
ꗃ﹕❜Focus points:
﹕❜Pacing Something in the middle type of pacing, Not too slow and Not too fast too. Perfect speed which I do say you should keep up with.
﹕❜Story Description Not much I would say but when you do describe certain things and places. It's not to a point which can be visualized but a little more on the too little side of description.
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