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Story: The VenerulAuthor: petrichortrees

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Story: The Venerul
Author: petrichortrees

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Reviewer: Jeon_Dinara

ꗃ﹕❜Cover and Title: 7/10

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ꗃ﹕❜Cover and Title: 7/10

﹕❜Cover:
The cover is good, but the title is small in size. The subtitle too is not visible properly. The background picture is good, with stars and planets, but it’s a little plain. There are many galactical images present on the web with colors: red, blue, purple, and so on, maybe you could use them as your background image. (or) Add two planets with their spaceships, opposite to each other, and a crack in between the page to show their rivalry. (These are just my opinions to enhance the cover, the current one looks good too, just increase the font size)

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