"We may not have won any prizes, but we're walking away like champs."
Carnivals, the place for happiness, love and joy. The place for the thrill of adventure, as you venture into with you companions, ready to enter as a player, and walk our as a win...
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ꗃ﹕❜Title: 4/5 The title is very interesting, intriguing, unique, and original but a little long. It may make it a bit hard to remember, but it is good nonetheless.
ꗃ﹕❜Cover: 4/5 It is Aesthetically pleasing and the color schemes and everything go perfectly well together.
ꗃ﹕❜Blurb: 4/5 The blurb is very intriguing and is written perfectly. It captures the plot but doesn't give out too much. Is the perfect length not too long but also not too short, a few punctuation marks are missing here and there but other than that perfect.
ꗃ﹕❜Hook: 4/5 A perfect paragraph to begin the book which definitely 'hooks' readers to read on to the other paragraphs. As you build up the suspense and the action.
ꗃ﹕❜Grammar & Spelling: 13/15 Absolutely perfect! Not a comma out of place and you used a variety of punctuation marks not just limiting yourself to a comma and period.
ꗃ﹕❜ Plot: 18/20 Very interesting indeed,As a fantasy book there seem to be numerous repetitions with the same plots over and over again and though this has been seen numerous times you have your own spin and twist and made it wonderful and enjoyable.
ꗃ﹕❜Writing Style: 8 /10 Unique and Original in your own way and gives the story a little twist with the way you describe each and every thing.
ꗃ﹕❜Writing Flow 7/10 Perfect transitions from scene to scene and Chapter to chapter but it does drag in certain places. (More highlighted under the focus points) ꗃ﹕❜Focus points:
﹕❜Characters 7/10
From what was presented, Each character has been well thought out and deeply developed on Their own level. Each character has an in depth Description of their natural physique which, yes is good, it hinders what we could learn at an emotional level. As we go on, The Characters don't seem to deepen on a personal level or their inner emotions are stretched out.
﹕❜Writing Flow It does drag in certain areas, With the numerous Descriptions of each character and setting which does ruin the flow or slow down the pace quite a little bit.
ꗃ﹕❜Overall I did highly enjoy this, I came in with high hopes from the blurb was slightly disappointed but the hype was regained as I read the later chapters.
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