"We may not have won any prizes, but we're walking away like champs."
Carnivals, the place for happiness, love and joy. The place for the thrill of adventure, as you venture into with you companions, ready to enter as a player, and walk our as a win...
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Is based on the first 10 chapters of the book.
ꗃ﹕❜Title: 3/5
I am having a hard time understanding the concept behind the title of the book. Is the word "meltdown" trying to refer to something or is it something randomly chosen by the author. To be honest, I am not sure how to feel about the title and that means that I have nothing good to say about it. But, neither do I have anything bad to say about it. The title is just-mediocre
ꗃ﹕❜Cover: 3/5
The cover of the book is beautiful but I just hoped that it had colours in it. The black and white picture isn't really eye-catching so maybe you can take advantage of the thousand graphic shops here. Also, maybe the cover can be illustrative pointing to the love triangle it features. This is just an opinion but you should take this into consideration.
ꗃ﹕❜BLURB: 10/10
The blurb of the book is highly interesting. It points to the love triangle and it does intrigue people to click on it. It was well done.
ꗃ﹕❜Writing Style: 19/20
Contains both on the writing style but other aspects of the writing. Although I'm not a huge fan of first person POV, the chapters were pretty well written. There were barely any missing points or lack of punctuation. The grammar was also well done and the writing was also good. Though, I would like to point out that the writing did get boring at some points where our main character delved too much into description and detail. But, apart from that everything was well done
ꗃ﹕❜Characters: 15/20
I really like how the characters are not one dimensional. Wyatt is not the stereotypical billionaire and June is a headstrong woman. I also like how the main character is a person of colour rather than a milky white person. Myles is a struggling father and I was really intrigued to learn his story. In short, the characters were really well done as well. Though, I would like to see how well the character development goes and the pace of the characters
ꗃ﹕❜Pace and Conflict: 10/20
The pace of the book is well done. It's not drawn out or going too quickly either. The characters are introduced in a proper manner and I really liked how the author did a good job in giving the characters their own time in the story. Since the book is ongoing I have yet not made up my mind about the conflict or how it would be handled. But, I do hope that it is nothing cliche.
ꗃ﹕❜Enjoyment: 9/10
I really enjoyed reading the chapters and would love to read the book too. The author did a good job in establishing her ideas and characters and I really liked how the main character is not stupid. She speaks her mind and knows what she is doing and I really liked it.
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