Blood Lust - A Jeff the Killer Love story

AUTHOR'S NOTE (PLEASE READ)

Sooooooooo......... um.........

I've been noticing some stuff about my story that I don't like. Here's a list:

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1. It's always the same thing

Every day they wake up and eat breakfast, and then hang out for a while until Jeff and Laura go off by themselves and do something and then they hang out with the others until bedtime and then they say something sweet to each other and then they fall asleep. Ugh even I'm tired of it.

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2. I never include any other meals

I only ever include breakfast. :( Lunch and dinner need some love too!

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3. I never really include the other characters.

it's mostly Jeff and Laura. Masky and Hoody haven't been in here very much at all, neither have any of them except for Laura, Jeff, Jane, and Slender man. ;(

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4. I never switch P.O.V's.

It's always Laura's P.O.V. :c

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5. It really kind of boring.

I was reading it yesterday, and I found it kind of boring. I don't know. :/ What do you guys think?

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6. I don't really include any backstory on Laura. 

I'm sure you guys want to know a bit more about her mom and dad, and everything. 

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Well, that's my list. I'm working on improving all of those issues. <3

Leave a comment and let me know your opinion on all of these issues. <3

Also! Something new! If you would like to be in my story, just send me a message, telling me a little bit about yourself, and tell me who you'd like to be with or something.

I also take suggestions on characters you'd like to see more in my story! ;D 

Please send me some messages or leave some comments!

By the way, if you saw the last chapter, and saw the new character (Dru) That's actually one of my friends! Her username on here is: DruKyees8

She has a BEN drowned love story. It's amazing, and I'm actually a character in her story too! <3

In her story, I'm Jeff's girlfriend (Maggie.) c:

Bye lovelies! <3

Thanks for reading my looooong author's note, but it all needed to be said.

~ Lover_girl22