AFTER DAWN (EXTREMELY CHEESY!!! & NEEDS EDITING!)

CHAPTER 7

CHAPTER 7

  Me and Jacob had such a great time!As we walked near the house laughing we heard a huge crash.We froze and Jacob looked really alert.He held my hand and took me to hide under the window.I was going to ask him what was going on but he quietly shushed me.We both peeked and saw what was going on.I gasped.They were the red cloacks from my dream! They were all vampires.The one in the front who I assumed was the leader yelled "WHERE IS SHE!!!!!!"I was shivering all over with fear.I knew he must have been asking for me.'but why?'I wondered.Jacob noticed how frightened I was and he took my hand and squeezed it.He was trying to comfort me.He said "very well.Jane will you do the honorsAll of the sudden I saw everyone writhing in pain.It seemed like my mother was suffering the most.She was screaming and writhing in pain, begging him to stop and it must be all my fault.I started to scream.Luckily Jacob put his mouth over my hand and the scream got muffled.A tear rolled down my cheek.They started to ruin everything in sight.They crashed vases and flipped over chairs,couches,even tables.I screamed into Jacobs hand the whole time.Especially when they broke the piano.The same piano my father taught me how to play ever since I was little.Just when I thought it couldn't get any worse,they started to shatter the windows one by one.Me and Jacob ducked when they crashed our window.The glass shards scrached my cheek and one dug a deep wound in my arm.I bit my tongue.I noticed the leader writing a letter which must be meant for me.They took my family and left.As soon as th coast was clear I ran inside."wait!What are you doing?"said Jacob.I digged through the debris.Looking for them.I knew it was hopless.I just couldn't register the thought that they were gone.I couldn't face the reality.I found the note.It read :

  Renesme,we have been expecting you.But before you get too comfortable,lets cut to the chase.You want your family to live?You come to us!

If you don't agree to the deal,we will comtinue killing everyone one by one in Forks.Starting with your family.All the deaths of those poor people and it will

be all your fault.You no were to find us.We'll be expecting you soon.

  I read the letter three times to see if this was really happening.Was this really true?Or do my eyes decieve me?I couldn't feel my legs.I fell on my knees.I started to sob,covering my face with my hands.I didn't want to look at anything or anyone. "No..No!NO!" Jacob finally made it through all the debris and noticed me in my state.I kept on shouting the words no over and over again.He saw the note lying next to me and read next to me while sitting down.He finally realized what was going on with me.He put his arm around me and said "Renesme,their gone".I shook my head and said "No!Their not."He took a deap breath and said "Renesme".He kept on trying to tell me but I looked away.He took my hands away from my face and looked me in the eyes.I closed them."Renesme...Renesme!Look at me!"I finally gave up and opened my eyes."They are all gone!"he said sternly.His words sunk in.And I was dafeated.I started to cry harder.He came closer to me and held me in a tight hug.I felt dozens of emotions.Guilt,desperation,and depression.If I could turn back the clock and change  my last words to them I would.They all risked their lives for me and they are there suffering because of me.And all of the people in Forks might also die because of me!Especially Grandpa Charlie(thats right,I didn't forget about him.Charlie hates it when I call him Grandpa)So mysery solved.The Volturi are th on responsible for all the murder crimes in Forks these days.I guess this is all up to me.After while of sobbing,Jake noticed my wound from the window crash.I lost alot of my blood.He held my head with his palms,wiped my tears and said, "lets get you home and fix that wound."I nodded.I was getting a little dizzy from loosing all that blood so I could barely walk.Jake took off pants quickly when I was turned around.He phased to his wolf form and I hopped on.We were off.