the surprise ( co written by kingcommenter)

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Niall POV

I hope Louis doesn't hate me for what I told him. Zayn already hates

me, but I never said I loved Harry, Harry loves me. But I can't not

lie and say maybe I do have feelings for Harry. Zayn doesn't want me

no more. I sigh and walk towards the bathroom to check on Lou. I knock

on the door.

"Lou, you there." I asked knocking on the door. I hear crying so I

turn the knob and I see blood on the floor and on Lou's stomach.

"LOU!" I screamed rushing towards him, he looks surprise and and scared.

"Shit, I thought I locked the door." Louis said trying to clean up the

mess on the floor.

, I-I just couldn't take the pain it makes me feel good you know what's its like." Louis said stuttering and

cleaning his cut from his stomach.

"Yea... was the r-reason you c-cut because of w-what I told you

a-about H-Harry" I asked nervously.it's all

my fault, i shouldn't have told Louis.

"Y-Yea, I thought Harry loved me, but he loves you." Louis said sadly.

Then Louis took the blade and was about to stab his stomach, but I

push my hand over his stomach and the blade stab my hand.

"Ah shit" I said biting my tongue. The blade pierced my hand and

left a gash in the middle of my hand

"Shit, I'm sorry, Niall I didn't mean to hurt you." Louis voice

cracked. I hugged himand he started to cry.

"It's ok, Louis I know, but you gotta stop hurting yourself. I want

you to know that Harry is in love with me, but I am not." I said,

reassuring Louis.

"You don't" Louis asked, shocked. I shake my head.

"No, I still love Zayn, but since he read the text message on my

phone, he probably hates me and is doing something crazy." I said,

frowning. I'm so stupid I should've told Zayn the truth, but he had to

find out the hard way.

"Then, what are you going to say too Harry." Louis questions while

applying pressure to my wound,

"The truth, it's the only option, I have been lying to much and I need

to stop, I lost Zayn by not telling him about how Harry feels." I

said, crying. To think Zayn found someone better than me breaks my

heart. He will never love me again, because I keep lying in his face,

about the cutting and now the Harry situation.

"You haven't lost Zayn, he just probably cooling off somewhere." Louis

said cleaning my tears away from my hand.

"I hope so."

Louis and I finish cleaning up the mess in the bathroom, I made sure

Louis cut is not too deep. Louis and I exited out of the bathroom and

go to Harry room.

"Harry, I want you to know that I love you, but not that kind of way,

as a brother yes, but I am in love with someone else." I said taking

his hand as his lifeless body was laying there

i walk out the room to leave louis alone with his hazza

LOUIS POV

I sit down on the seat next to Harry, I see Niall walking out the room

giving us some alone time.

"I know your still in love with Niall, but I can promise you Harry

that I will be there of you no matter what." I pleaded taking Harry's cold

hand,

"When Niall told me that you texted him about that you loved him, I

was crushed and heartbroken. That's what made me realize my feelings

for you Harry." I said, I get up from the sit and lift my shirt.

"I cut like Niall, I just couldn't take the pain inside my heart any

longer so I cut, that's when Niall found me in the bathroom. He made

me realize, if I want something than I should fight for it." I said,

crying.

I kissed him on the lips.

Niall POV

i hear footsteps and someone calling out "zayn don't do anything stupid!!!"

"SO YOU'RE GOING TO TELL ME, THAT YOU RATHER HAVE HARRY OVER ME." Zayn screamed.

"NO, I DIDN'T CHOOSE HARRY I CHOOSE YOU, OK IT'S ALWAY BEEN YOU." I

screamed back.

"I saw the messages, Niall I know what Harry wrote." Zayn sneered.

"So, he told me he loved me, but I told him I love someone else." I said

"Then your fucking around with someone else who is it?" Zayn said getting

close to my face.

" is it liam" he says

" no bro it ain't me" liam says as he walks away

"YOU" I scream smashing my lips on Zayn's. He push me one the bed

never breaking the kiss. Zayn kisses my jawline and makes me moan.

Hazza's P.O.V.

all of this yelling is pissing me the fuck off

i try to scream

" could we all just shut the fuck up"

nothing happens

i try again

Nothing i try one last time

and it works

they all look at me in shock and say in unison

"Harry"!!!!!

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