Divergent High

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Beatrice took in a deep breath before she entered the classroom. This was her chance to start fresh and forget her horrible past. Today she wore blue jeans and a slightly baggy orange shirt. Her hair was out. She hated when her hair was out for it got in her face but her mother had insisted. She pulls some sunglasses out of her bag and props them on her head to keep the hair out of her face.

Beatrice pushed open the door and everyone stopped what they were doing and turned towards her. Some of the guys were snickering but the girls looked at her like she was nothing special.

"Miss Prior is it?" the teacher asks. I nod, unable to talk.

"Welcome to 10F. I'm Mr. Frosch and I am your German teacher. I will partner you up with Lynn so that she can show you around." He points towards a girl sitting in the first row. Her head is shaved and she looks at Tris unpleasantly.

Beatrice sits down beside her, unsure what to do or say. "Hi, I'm Beatrice. You're Lynn right?"

"Beatrice." Lynn laughs at her name. Beatrice sits as far away from Lynn then as possible, sitting on the right side of her chair.