I want to start by saying the amount of readers on this story is crazy. I had not expected so many people to become interested in reading it.
Its not a secret that this story is a really rough draft. I had tried to edit,but failed because after the story had finally finished fan fiction had lost my attention.
These days I read more realistic fiction because the fan-fiction I do find on Wattpad is poorly written (like mine) and just overall hard to read.
I would like to say, It has been forever since I even glanced at Revitalized. I do get a lot of the comments questioning everything and pointing things out that I know could be better or don't make sense.
The comments make me want to look back and make the story better. To Plan it out and create something that has a plot.
There is no story structure for this because I was writing for fun. I was writing this story to test out my skills and see what I could come up with (which was a mess that could be better).
Anyways, before I can do any type of reincarnation story I have to find my passion for Twilight. I fell in love with fan-fiction Twilight especially La Push and the wolf pack.
Let me mention I was also going through the wolf phase. I got more into the wolf shindig when I first got to Wattpad-I was obsessed-now it's like I can't even get the guts to click one.
❗️On the other hand, I will be remaking this story at some point❗️
I won't take it down till I have re-written half the chapters and created a cover and summery that satisfies me.
Now, to those that have already read it you can read the new draft or don't.
Finally, I just want to thank you all for sticking around to read this annoyingly, cringey (is this even a word), rough,ROUGH,story that has no plot.
XOXO
Fleur Landry
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Revitalized
FanfictionKayla Swan embarks on a life changing journey as her older sister moves back to Forks. With her, Bella brings a brewing storm that obligates Kayla to be swept into. This storm takes people, spills blood, and emotionally wrecks Kayla's once calm life...