ISAAC's OC REVIEWs

Lucas Griffin [D]

Please note that I ask a lot of questions throughout the review, you by no means have to answer them, they are simply to get you thinking more in-depth about your character. Enjoy!

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fandom: original. (i use this oc for literally everything under the sun, but especially in post-apocalyptic scenarios, so let's just go with that, lmao.)

[Righto off we go.]

full name: lucas griffin.

nicknames: n/a.

age: eighteen.

gender: male.

sexuality: homosexual. (the big gay👉😎👉)

species: human.

nationality: american.

appearance: lucas stands at about five six, and while he doesn't look it, is actually pretty strong.

[ How much does he weigh? With his height being 5'6" his healthy weight range would be anything from around 116lbs {53kg} – 156lbs {70kg}. However, if he doesn't look 5'6" I'd be tempted to keep his weight towards the lower side of the healthy weight scale.]

he has curly blond hair that while isn't particularly long, falls into his face quite a bit. he also has a large scar that comes from the top of his shoulder down to the middle of his arm; let's just say that he wasn't the smartest kid alive. lucas typically wears either a red or blue hoodie, jeans, and a pair of mono black hi top converse.

[ The content is fine. Start to think about his facial features, his eye colour and such. How does he feel about his scar? Is he open to talking about it?]

personality: lucas is one pretty messed up dude. aside from generally just being overly cocky and stubborn, he has some definite anger issues and hates being told what to do.

[ Can we give a reason why he doesn't like being told what to do? Can we think about why he is arrogant? How did his past mould him to become this Lucas rather than a Lucas that, for example, may a nervous paranoid mess? With his anger issues, do a little research on his anger issues, what are they? What can trigger the anger? Yadda yadda. Aside from angry, how does his anger issues and his hate towards authority/being told what to do make him feel?]

he's fiercely loyal and would do anything for the people he trusts- just, don't expect him to trust you.

[ What would someone have to do to be worthy of Lucas' trust?]

lucas is extremely prideful and usually refuses to accept help from other people, even in life or death situations- which can be a small issue.

[ Let's extend on that and say how this small issue affects him and or others around him. How would it affect him in a work environment?]

while he does have a soft side, he rarely shows it, so good luck getting him to talk. if you just give him a chance- if you really, really try- you'll realize that he's a good guy.

[ Unless this is being withheld because of spoilers can we start to think about how his softer side differs from his 'normal' or 'default' side? What are some of the things he does to show that he's actually a good guy? Is he aware of his own softer side? If so, how does he feel about it?]

skills: lucas loves to skateboard and is actually quite good at it.

[ When, why and by whose teaching did he learn his skateboarding skills? Has he got any skateboarding 'horror' stories from when he's fallen off his board and gotten a proper nasty injury from it? I know he's got that scar but it's not clear if that was caused by skateboarding, or his past relationships, or what. Perhaps if we think about adding something like '...is actually quite good at it, but has his fair share of 'battle scars'/stories from his {however many} years in the sport.' I reckon that'll show that he's had to practise to get where he is with this skill, shows that yes he's failed in the past {in the form of falling off the board} but has refused to give up and got back on it. In short, it shows determination/passion towards his sport... and or stubbornness.]