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Angelica J. Harrison

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This OC and review contain themes of PTSD and Autism. If you're uncomfortable with any of the above, I suggest overlooking this review.

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Grammar check: yeah.

Fandom: An original thing. It takes place far off in the future. The earth has become covered with technology, not having a single trace of nature left aside from a single flower or 2. Robots basically do all of the work for humans, making a lot of them lose their jobs and become poor. Due to this, the people protest and protest.

[ The final sentence, you don't need the 'the' before people. "Due to this, people protest and protest" is fine to say. A general rule for writing numbers, if it's under 10 write it fully. Example: 'a single flower or two.' Have a think of the location, I can only assume it's somewhere in Britain. With technology essentially ousting nature, think about the effects this may have had on the Earth? Positive? Negative? What does Andi think of this?]

Full name: Angelica jane Harrison (this is a reworked version of angelica, Yeah. Though her first name has a latin origin her last name is british. Her name means, well, Angel. It comes from the word angelicus, which means angelic.)

[ Harrison would be English not British. Harrison's a fairly common last name over here. Capitalise the following; Jane, Angelica, Latin, and British.]

Nicknames: Andi ( this was a nickname she gave herself. She got it from the gorillaz song andromeda , getting a humanz vinyl on her 13th birthday.)

[ Consider if vinyl would still be about in the future and their cost. I know they don't come cheap and although they are seeming more popular now than in the late 90s-00s, they still seem to be a somewhat niched item. Consider why Angelica likes the Gorillaz and their song 'Andromeda'. Capitalise the following; Gorillaz, Andromeda, and Humanz.]

Angel, mainly used by her mother. Angel-chan, given to her by her little sister midori.

[ Consider how she feels by being called these. Big 'M' for Midori.]

Age:14

Gender: female

Sexuality: lesbian

Social class: her family is in the middle.

Species: human.

Nationality: a pure britian indeed.

[ She'd be 'British' rather than 'britian', in this case. Consider what country Andi comes from. I can only speak from my experience but most British people I've met, including myself, don't regard ourselves as British instead we tend to go with our national identity. So using myself as an example, while I state or have to state I'm British in legal documentations, I refer to myself as English because I am just that, from England.]

Appearance: She is 105 pounds, mainly standing at 5'2 and having a skinny build with no visible curves in her body, having a flat chest as well. She has messy dirty blonde hair cut to her neck, with one seemingly faded ocean blue streak in her hair. She has grey eyes and a fair skin tone, some freckles being visible on her face, along with a cat scratch on her face.

[ Consider how she feels about her appearance and if she cares for her appearance. Why did she dye her hair to start with? Does she have plans to re-dye it? {I'm assuming it's dyed anyway.} Consider how she got the cat scratch... I know obviously from a cat, but what led up to her getting scratched. Could be as simple as the family cat or a friend's cat getting riled up and going for Andi. Alternatively, we could get a little wild and say she was attacked by a stray cat while we searching for scrap parts for her inventions. Think about where her scar actually is on her face and how she feels about having it.]