RESULT - TEEN FICTION (PARTICIPANTS)

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Hello lovely writers

Teen Fiction is judged Ouryoaie, scribbly_writer, seriously_insane_25 and black_angel_1027. The judges have done a great job by pointing out the weak points and strong points. So, take the review positively/constructively to make your book better. If you have any doubts about the result feel free to PM the judges but with politeness.

Here is the result for all the participants. Don't feel demotivated but with this result try to fill all the loop holes of your story.

1. Book name: His Last wish

Author name: @thatgoofynerd

Judge name: seriously_insane_25

Book cover and title=9/10

Description=4/5

Style and verbal skill=9/10

Characters=4/5

Language=8/10

Grammar, vocabulary and spellings=18/20

Overall: 52/60

Review: Good work with a bit of an emotional storyline. Nice and wholesome cover.

2. Book name: Killian's Ocean

Author name: @SheReadsAndWrites02

Judge name: Ouryoaie

Book Title & Cover - (10/10)

Description - (4/5)

Style & Verbal Skill - (9/10)

Characters - (5/5)

Language - (10/10)

Grammar, Vocabulary, Spellings - (13/20)

Overall: (51/60)

Review - This is a good book. I really loved the interactions and the style as to which you wrote the story. I was emotionally involved and I could feel the pain Ocean was going through. Even though there were barely any spelling errors, there were a lot of errors with your tenses and use of punctuation marks.

3. Book name: The life of Holly brown

Author name: @ellacarter789

Judge name: seriously_insane_25

Book cover and title=9/10

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