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Writer's pov
Manik sat there all still which made nandini's eyes filled with tears... on which he cupped her face asking...
Manik: jaanu! Why are you crying?
Nandini looked at him and asked him with all the fear... pushing away his hands from her face
Nandini: you don't want to love me na? I knew it!
Manik was shocked with the choice of words she used... but then he was already warned by the doctor...
Look boy, she might sometimes say some things which she didn't wanted tonsay or you don't want to listen, but don't let it over power it on yourself and her, she won't mean any single word she will say in her insecurity, all you need to do is to take away her insecurities then only she can be all fine...
Manik remembered the words of the doctor ans he himself knew she didn't meant it... she was all fine a while ago and it was her fear which triggered yet again making her say this...
On which manik cupped her face making her look at him... he wiped ber tears with his tumb saying...
Manik: you really think I don't want it?
Nandini looked at his face for a few seconds and then nodded in no making him smile as he placed his lips on her sucking her lips ever so lovingly...
Saanson ko jeene ka ishaara mill gaya
Dooba main tujhme to kinara mill gaya (manik made her lay while kissing her who reciprocated it while wrapping her arms around his neck pulling her closer)
Saanson ko jeene ka ishara mil gaya
Zindagi ka pata dobara mil gaya (manik pulled back looking at her face which was now shinning with love... and smiled and coming close to her ear mumbled an I LOVE YOU)
Tu mila to Khuda ka sahaara mill gaya
Tu mila to Khuda ka sahaara mill gaya (he placed a kiss on her ear love making her hold his shirt from back as he kissed her all the way downto her neck)
Ghamzada ghamzada dil ye tha ghamzada
Bin tere, bin tere, dil ye tha ghamzada (looking deep in her eyes he pulled down her sleeve from her left shoulder and then dipped his face over there kissing and sucking to let to the marks scream that she is his love)
Aaraam de tu mujhe, barson ka hun main thaka
Palkon pe raatein liye, tere waste main jaga (pulling her short from the body and throwing it away he kissed every inch on her before taking out her inner which was followed by his shirt)
Aaraam de tu mujhe, barson ka hun main thaka
Palkon pe raatein liye, tere waste main jaga (nandini pulled down his face as he placed kiss on his neck and his collar bone while manik kept hovering her closing his eys feeling her kisses)
Mere har dard ki gehrai ko mehsoos karta hai tu
Teri aankhon se gham tera mujhe maaloom hone laga (both laid close to each other all naked as they touched and felt their bodies next to each other feeling the love)
Tu mila to Khuda ka sahaara mill gaya
Tu mila to Khuda ka sahaara mill gaya (manik kissed her cheek followed by her whole body as she sucked her breath holding the pillow in a tight grip with a smile on her lips)
Main raaz tujhse kahun humraz ban ja zara
Karni hai kuch guftgu alfaaz ban ja zara (loving her body to no extent he came up to her face creasing it looking at her with a small smile, while nandini hugged him holding his neck before joining their lips)
Main raaz tujhse kahun humraz ban ja zara
Karni hai kuch guftgu alfaaz ban ja zara (nandini threw her head back as she felt alive yet again in his love with a big smile on her lips... while manik felt him getting lost in her as he kissed her nape while loving her)
Juda jab se hua, Tere bina khamosh rehta hoon me
Labon ke paas aa, Ab tu meri aawaaz bann ja zara (manik loved her who reciprocated with so much eagerness as she kissed him all the time he took to love him showing himer that she still belong to him and will always do)
Tu mila to Khuda ka sahara mill gaya
Tu mila to Khuda ka sahara mill gaya (both felt out of breath as manik laid down on her with both of her legs on either side of his body and she held him close to her not letting him move away from her for a second)
Ghamzada ghamzada dil ye tha ghamzada
Bin tere, bin tere, dil ye tha ghamzada (manik laid beside her before taking her limped body in his arms with a smile on her lips and happiness and shine radiating her face and he placed a kiss on the top of her head)
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Manik's pov
I kissed her head all the time while she was busy holding my hand playing with it just like before.... i felt complete yet again having her this much closer to me... i felt like i came back to the life yet again.. i was pulled back from my thought by nandini who spoke...
Nandini: manik!
I hmmed on which she continued!
Nandini: we will survive this! Right?
I looked down at her who raised her head to me... i kissed her head and spoke...
Me: we will jaanu!
She passed me a small smile as she again laid there... while unknowingly my mind went back to the thought of our baby... i don't know why even after trying so hard I couldn't take this thought iut of my head... and my hand reached her abdomen creasing it...
Jaanu was fast asleep which made me move a bit as i made her lay turing to right side and kissed her forehead and then moved a bit down and removed the duvet from her stomach... and then i laid there looking at her stomach kissing it again and again creasing the abdomen...
Me: she loved him as she felt him there, i loved him when i got to knwo about him, but you took him away from before giving him to us, why you did that?
I asked complaining to God... thinking about what happened to both my loves... one went away... and one is here with me all broken...
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