《 As We Are 》

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✧ Reviewer :: CoolWhenUrBatman✧ Reviewee :: Sao_kai✧ Book :: As We Are

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✧ Reviewer :: CoolWhenUrBatman
✧ Reviewee :: Sao_kai
✧ Book :: As We Are

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Basics :: 12.5 | 20

⚘ Cover :: 01 | 05

◍ Not very good. It's just a picture with a text slapped over it. I'd suggest using another picture, either a face claim or a if you want to have a typography with a better background. I'd also suggest changing the font to something prettier and then a different one for the user. If you yourself aren't capable of making one there are plenty of graphic shops—and our own community offers one— where you can order one.

⚘ Synopsis :: 04 | 05

◍ Very interesting, I liked it. Simple yet intriguing.

⚘ Title :: 4.5 | 05

◍ I really liked it, the name and the plot go hand in hand.

⚘ Execution :: 03 | 05

◍ I like the idea, but I don't think you've done a great job executing it. There are different factors that have affected the quality of your work and they all need to get better in order for you to have a nice book. Take a look at the points I've made and try changing them. Finding a beta would also be a great help.

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