《 Poison Among Shadows 》

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✧ Reviewer :: Chaotic_Lals✧ Reviewee :: ZianDutt✧ Book :: Poison Among Shadows

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✧ Reviewer :: Chaotic_Lals
✧ Reviewee :: ZianDutt
✧ Book :: Poison Among Shadows

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Basics :: 17.5 | 20

⚘ Cover :: 4.5 | 05

◍ It looks splendid, really. Just a tiny bit of adjustments? The 'D' in 'SHADOWS' looks a tad bit weird. Also, the part were 'D' and 'O' intersects, looks like a 'Y'. It might just be me, but it looks a bit awkward.

⚘ Synopsis :: 04 | 05

◍ The synopsis is very engaging. It has all the elements a book's blurb asks for. However, I feel like a part could be better written. The 'Until her aunt betrays her' is awkward when in the beginning of a paragraph. You can either put the sentence in a single line, and start a paragraph from the next sentence, or add a 'That is' preceding 'until'. Other than this, your blurb is good to go.

⚘ Title :: 4.5 | 05

◍ Suitable and attractive.

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⏰ Last updated: Jul 28, 2022 ⏰

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