《 Kiara Flames 》

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✧ Reviewer :: BTS7ARMY8FOREVER✧ Reviewee :: 99problemstosolve✧ Book :: Kiara Flames

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✧ Reviewer :: BTS7ARMY8FOREVER
✧ Reviewee :: 99problemstosolve
✧ Book :: Kiara Flames

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Basics :: 15.5 | 20

⚘ Cover :: 03 | 05

◍ The cover goes with it nicely, it portrays everything well, but it's not clear, it's blurry, so make it clearer also the line below, 'Kiara Flames', isn't visible, please make it darker and make it visible. The sticker added on top, isn't visible either, so please make it clearer, through the 'enhance' feature of the app Remini or just increase the quality.

⚘ Synopsis :: 04 | 05

◍ It's well written and will have people interested in the story! It has everything a blurb should have. It just seems a bit too long to me, however it's good it doesn't give off any much of the info, but I'd suggest you make it a scene with a cliffhanger.

⚘ Title :: 4.5 | 05

◍ The title goes with the story nicely, because it's the story of a girl named 'Kiara Flames', so I guess it's a perfect match, and there's no problem with it not matching the genre! I must say, you used your brain cleverly!

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