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《 Stay 》

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✧ Reviewer :: Lyrics_pages237
✧ Reviewee :: selenophilicsapphire
✧ Book :: Stay

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◖Basics :: 17 | 20◗

⚘ Cover :: 4.5 | 05

◍ The cover was lovely but too simple. It seemed more like a photo. It didn't convey anything about the book and is less likely to capture attention.

⚘ Synopsis :: 04 | 05

◍ The synopsis was good but I would ask you to tell us more about the story we are going to read. More required information.

⚘ Title :: 05 | 05

◍ It is good.

⚘ Execution :: 3.5 | 05

◍ It was a good story with a good amount of surprises and twists. Lots of unexpected but wonderful elements were added to fit perfectly. This story is a great idea that has a good creative base for a plot but the problems is ... lots of plot holes.

○ Plot & Creativity :: 7.5 | 10

◍ A story with a creative plot but lots of plot holes. . It was simple ones that could be covered up but it is visible enough to get us questioning and put the book down.

○ Writing Style :: 07 | 10

◍ The writing style needs to contain more descriptions & depth. The flow was off in some places; the scenes weren't given enough time to build.

◖Grammar & Vocabulary :: 16.5 | 20◗

⚘ Grammar :: 8.5 | 10
⚘ Vocabulary :: 08 | 10

◍ There were a vocabulary mistakes that can be fixed with a good over view from an editor but the writing was good.

○ Emotions Conveyed :: 8.5 | 10

◍ Due to the writing style, the emotions conveyed couldn't be up to the mark.

○ Character Development :: 8.5 | 10

◍ Character presentations were great with slightly dramatic but just great entrances.

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Total :: 65 | 80

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