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◍ Firstly, the cover matches your story's theme, which is most certainly a fantasy one. But you could have chosen a better picture. Then, the font of the title isn't really big, quite not very visible, you can change its size and make it larger. You can, you know, add a subtitle or quote which relates to the story, it makes the cover look even more attractive. The author's name is really big, it's not a problem, but it's really big, and looks like subtitles.
⚘ Synopsis :: 03 | 05
◍ The blurb is quite good and catchy, I'll say. But quite complicated too, try to make it short and simple. You can also add some dialogues to make it more attractive, a blurb plays an important role to make the reader read your story, it should be interesting.
⚘ Title :: 04 | 05
◍ The title is new and exciting, it was to me. But it can always improve. The word 'Helel' itself is really interesting. I know the meaning, that's a different case, but it would be better if you wrote the meaning in the description, like you wrote 'shamayim' as 'heaven'.
