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◍ Thecover was pretty and it displayed all the necessities. The only thing I feltmissing in it was it lacked the connection to the story. I didn't find itconnected to the story at all.
⚘ Synopsis :: 04 | 05
◍ Synopsis was well written. Intriguing and it attracted us to the story.
⚘ Title :: 05 | 05
◍ The title was well chosen.
⚘ Execution :: 3.5 | 05
◍ Overall, the idea of the story was pleasant. I just think it wasn't well thought of. The idea that the story revolves around would keep us intrigued but it wasn't presented well enough to continue reading. Presentation can be improved.
○ Plot & Creativity :: 07 | 10
◍ There is a wonderful idea for a plot in hand but the story weaved from it is a bit lose around the ends.
○ Writing Style :: 07 | 10
◍ Like mentioned, the writing style needs to be improvised. Descriptions are needed, and you are supposed to build the plot up slowly.
◖Grammar & Vocabulary :: 13 | 20◗
⚘ Grammar :: 6.5 | 10 ⚘ Vocabulary :: 6.5 | 10
◍ Thewriting kept the story dragging on sometimes and there wasn't anything new tokeep us going. there were many mistakes in the grammar and vocabulary area butI believe that can be fixed with good editing.
○ Emotions Conveyed :: 4.5 | 10
◍ Due to the errors mentioned under writing style, & plot & creativity, the emotions were not conveyed properly.
○ Character Development :: 5.5 | 10
◍ The problem that pulled this story back a lot was the lack of emotional connection and story development. We couldn't connect with the character, the chapters kept on dragging about her days but there wasn't anything tht truly conveyed her emotions. The development of the story was very slow but if we could wok on all of this and present the idea of the story well...I think this could be a great story at hand.
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Total :: 68.5 | 80
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