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✧ Reviewer :: CoolWhenUrBatman ✧ Reviewee :: 0valeyes ✧ Book :: Are You Afraid Of The Dark? Ghost Tape
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◖Basics :: 08 | 20◗
⚘ Cover :: 01 | 05
◍ It's not something that would attract readers. I personally don't think hand drawn pictures are a good cover to have. I'd recommend using a graphic shop if you're unable to make your own graphics.
⚘ Synopsis :: 02 | 05
◍ Complete lack of punctuation. I had a hard time reading and understanding that. Please add some punctuation in there. It's very confusing, maybe it's because I don't know what fandom this is, but the synopsis should be in a way that someone from outside the fandom can understand it.
⚘ Title :: 03 | 05
◍ Nice and suits the book. Not overly creative, though.
⚘ Execution :: 02 | 05
◍ It can be improved, but It didn't leave a good impression on me.
○ Plot & Creativity :: 05 | 10
◍ To be frank, I have no idea what I read. I understand the general idea, but not the specifics. It didn't really have a plot.
○ Writing Style :: 05 | 10
◍ Not standard. Everything was mixed. Please look up writing styles and try applying them to your writing.
◖Grammar & Vocabulary :: 10 | 20◗
⚘ Grammar :: 05 | 10
◍ Complete lack of punctuation gave me a hard time reading and understanding. Wrong use of abbreviations (their instead of they're and so on).
When we're writing dialogues we do them like this:
"Hi," she said and waved, "How are you?"
You either add unnecessary spaces or forgo the commas. Please pay attention to these points.
⚘ Vocabulary :: 05 | 10
◍ Very basic vocabulary and lots of repetition. Try using synonyms.
○ Emotions Conveyed :: 00 | 10
◍ No emotions were conveyed.
○ Character Development :: 00 | 10
◍ No characters or development.
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Total :: 28 | 80
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