✧ Reviewer :: CoolWhenUrBatman
✧ Reviewee :: _jugnuu_
✧ Book :: Through Her Eyes══════════════════
◖Basics :: 10 | 20◗
⚘ Cover :: 02 | 05
◍ It doesn't convey the genre of the book and it's not very well made. The face claims don't go well together, and it's very basic. This wouldn't get the readers attention. Your characters are a pilot and a singer and when I look at the cover I don't see that or anything related to the book. Try making something along the lines of your book or if you're unable to, you can always order from a graphic shop.
⚘ Synopsis :: 02 | 05
◍ It's not very compelling. When I read it I wasn't feeling excited at the prospect or curious. You need something to draw the readers in, you have to make it exciting. It all seems very bland to me. Very monotonous. The first paragraph is good, it's the second part that needs work. Make it a longer summary and give some information to the readers but not enough to spoil the story. Something like the prelude you have in the first chapter would work wonders.
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