《 When Worlds Crossed 》

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✧ Reviewer :: _Writing_Beauty_✧ Reviewee :: conquestofthesomnium✧ Book :: When Worlds Crossed

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✧ Reviewer :: _Writing_Beauty_
✧ Reviewee :: conquestofthesomnium
✧ Book :: When Worlds Crossed

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Basics :: 16 | 20

⚘ Cover :: 04 | 05

◍ The cover is good, digital arts comes out amazing. What you can improve is, the font, title's font, good though, but the writer's name and font are too big that it seems like a subtitle. You can adjust it at either the very top or bottom, it ruins the look, also since there is some space, you can add subtitles.

⚘ Synopsis :: 03 | 05

◍ I'll say, the blurb itself that tells the story is a cliché one. Your story isn't a cliché one, but the description says it is. You must make the blurb interesting because the blurb and cover are the first impressions which should be good. The blurb seems to be telling the story plot, but it should be interesting too. You can add dialogues and some dividers in between descriptions about male main characters and female ones, that will help.

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