《 A Whole New World 》

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✧ Reviewer :: CoolWhenurBatman✧ Reviewee :: icecreamsundae5✧ Book :: A Whole New World

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✧ Reviewer :: CoolWhenurBatman
✧ Reviewee :: icecreamsundae5
✧ Book :: A Whole New World

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Basics :: 16.5 | 20

⚘ Cover :: 03 | 05

◍ I apologize for starting so strong but the people on the cover look off. It's a good cover that matches the story but the execution is lacking. Vector covers are very difficult and I applaud whoever has made this for trying and succeeding to a degree. However matching it is, I'd suggest changing it or improving it (and I hope you improve it because it's a very fitting cover) . Watching some tutorials on YouTube could be a big help.

⚘ Synopsis :: 4.5 | 05

◍ Never judge a synopsis by its first paragraph. The ending gave me a shock and made me go from "oh, not another love triangle story" to "wait wait I neeeed to read this". Mary Sue stories are absolutely a favorite of mine and I think your synopsis has done a wonderful job attracting attention. I pity those who read the first paragraph and then swiped away.

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