《 Night & Thorns 》

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✧ Reviewer :: Siya_Stark3000✧ Reviewee :: -vvalen✧ Book :: Night & Thorns

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✧ Reviewer :: Siya_Stark3000
✧ Reviewee :: -vvalen
✧ Book :: Night & Thorns

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Basics :: 12 | 20

⚘ Cover :: 03 | 05

◍ Cover was good. It gave information about the author's name and the story's title quite well. Yet, the text of the author's name and especially the subtitle was too miniature to be read properly. I suggest to increase their size. Also, you can add more elements and font style to your cover. The glow effect on the text was good, but the vibes were off. It didn't give vibes of something related to Greek gods. More like dark romance and royalty. So, you can modify the cover a bit.

⚘ Synopsis :: 03 | 05

◍ Synopsis was informative. Yet, it needs a certain style in presentation. The use of capital letters looked a bit off. I suggest you use different fonts for the sentences with capitalization, if you want to highlight them. Writing elements like line barriers and various font styles could help you improve your presentation. The blurb needs a bit of organization. Your style to use character introduction as line barriers was quite unique, but it genuinely broke the flow. So you should try a different approach to represent your blurb according to me.

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