《 Your Mafia, My Consigliore 》

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✧ Reviewer :: CoolWhenUrBatman✧ Reviewee :: Durarafhana✧ Book :: Your Mafia, My Consigliore

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✧ Reviewer :: CoolWhenUrBatman
✧ Reviewee :: Durarafhana
✧ Book :: Your Mafia, My Consigliore

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Basics :: 12 | 20

⚘ Cover :: 04 | 05

◍ Very good. Nice choice of colors, go well with the theme of the book. The font and the placement is also very nice. Every needed detail is there and visible.

⚘ Synopsis :: 02 | 05

◍ It isn't bad but I feel like there's something missing. I don't feel excited to read this story based on it and it doesn't compel me to at least take a peak. It's very simple so you need to make it more intriguing, you want someone to read it and tap on read and unfortunately your current synopsis isn't doing that. Add more elements to it, give some plot but maintain the mystery.

⚘ Title :: 04 | 05

◍ Sounds good and makes the reader have a general idea of what to expect.

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