《 Free Fall 》

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✧ Reviewer :: CoolWhenUrBatman✧ Reviewee :: underthemoment ✧ Book :: Free Fall

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✧ Reviewer :: CoolWhenUrBatman
✧ Reviewee :: underthemoment
✧ Book :: Free Fall

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Basics :: 16.5 | 20

⚘ Cover :: 04 | 05

◍ Nice cover, with all the necessary information. Very attractive.

⚘ Synopsis :: 04 | 05

◍ Very nice, attracts attention, gives away without spoiling and makes the reader want to read more.

⚘ Title :: 4.5 | 05

◍ Very accurate.

⚘ Execution :: 04 | 05

◍ There was literally nothing for me to review. Why are you even here? Go get this book published.


Plot & Creativity :: 09 | 10

◍ Very interesting plot. I loved reading this book and it wasn't cliché as most books like this would be. The gay was a bonus. The plot and the twists — just amazing.


Writing Style :: 09 | 10

◍ Standard and descriptive.


Grammar & Vocabulary :: 18.5 | 20

⚘ Grammar :: 09 | 10

◍ Very solid and wide range of grammar. But pay attention to em dashes. When you want to add additional information and use em dashes (—) don't put space before or after them. If you're using spaces, you need to use space, before & after them.

When she saw him—after nearly three months—it was in the middle of a park.

Besides that everything was used correctly. 

⚘ Vocabulary :: 9.5 | 10

◍ Wide range and good use of synonyms.


Emotions Conveyed :: 09 | 10

◍ Due to the writing style it's very easy to connect to the characters and get attached. You have a way with words. Well done.


Character Development :: 09 | 10

◍ It's evident that your characters have a solid foundation and there's been a lot of time spent on characteristics. They're all very unique and it's interesting to see them through the story, struggling and learning.


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Total :: 71 | 80

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